>so people put up with his foolishness.
about Ilya. OP just implied, having ideals == being foolish. it is as close to calling a non-profit, wacky.
It is an honour based system to clarify what you edited if it goes beyond typos/grammar.
Most probably GP used stronger words and then edited.
- immediately calls their structure “strange” thanks to Ilya’s “idealism”.
- immediately calls him the “man” for his talents but a fool for what other than his ideals
- also labels Helen and Tasha (in quotes for some reason) as fools
- labels the board as “comically poor” for no other reason than they disagree with Sam’s supposed profit motive
Do we really need to draw a diagram here? It seems like you yourself may be out of your depth when it comes to reading comprehension.