The actual problem is one of power and intention. Yes, version control would make earmarks obvious. Yes, it would make tracking contributors (lobbies) easier. Yes, it would make tailoring tried and trusted legal documents easy.
All of these are reasons why version control will never be applied to the law. We want these things, but we are not the customer. The real customer is actively trying to prevent these things from ever happening.
The reality is that these tools are probably already being used for these exact purposes - in private, and for personal gain.
The reality is that most of the people who complain about the lack of transparency are those who put the least effort into finding the available sources.